tumhe kaise batawu
is dil ka hal sajna
tum bin bitawu kaise
ye maah saal sajna
teri yaad ho rahi hai dhundli
in faslau ke aage
kahi kamzor na hojaye
hamari chahatau ke dhage
din raat mujh ko meri
chedti hai sakhya
puchti hai mujhko
kab aarahe hai sajna
muntazar hai teri
muddat se meri banhe
hai dar pe bhatakti
har pal meri nigahe
ab aabhi jawo sajna
bas ho gayi hai duri
sang raho tum mere
ke tum bin hu mai adhuri
33 comments:
Nice ...kindda reminds me of the song from "Bandani"
kehti hai aag mere mann ki
mein bandini piya ki
mein sangini hoon sajaan ki
well...cool poem..liked it a lot...well its really superb..!!!
thanks alot akshay..
thank you prajyot for praising so much.. alhamdulillah
dun u'stand this but Im sure its beautiful.
Keshi.
hey lovely..!
"kahi kamzor na hojaye
hamari chahatau ke dhage
"
loved these lines..:)
thanks alot.. huh? where am i..
keep visiting.
claps for ur poem...i really feel now i am alone ;)...
urs .hemu...
thanks hemanth...
what do mean alone?
away from some one? or need some one?
i included ur blog in my daily visied blogs list :)
i need some ..heheh lets hope i find one....
nice 1
hemanth.. decide first u need some.. or u need one.. hahahaha
hope u get a nice sweet girl as per ur wishes..
thanks for adding me in ur blog roll hemanth..
thankyou anonymous .. keep visiting
Nice!Would be a great hit if made into a song :)
really..
thankyou dear for visiting..
amazing yar!!!!you are superb!!!!
thankyou preeti
nice poem!!!
trying to find one but not finding her any where..
logon to
www.ni-shabd.blogspot.com
to see the world of silence.
tarunssssssss
thanks rahul for dropping by
tarun ... i visited that blog.. but sorry i find hindi script difficult to read.. the language that i use is urdu..
oh oh...highly romantic....
any guy wud fall if u say this to him...but the thing is use sober hindi..coz boys like me wont understand urdu..heheheh lol..
jokes apart..great work ishiqia..
i cannot write in language i dont know properly nirmal..
thanks for liking it
Nice....
U Write Cool Shayaris...
:)
thankyou am in a trance
lovely shayari
thanks anonymous.. keep visiting
nice blog..
i think ur blog is reflection of ur inner thohughts..!!
keep continue...
neways m updated my blog... u r welcome at my place..:)
yep deepak.. u too always welcome here
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