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ishqia

Sunday, June 8, 2008

lost in his charms


i opened my eyes one day
to find myself in his arms
he was so close to me
i was lost in his charms
he held me close to himself
and said i love you dear
it surely wasnt a dream
for he was hard and clear
the warmth of his love
made happiness run through my veins
he surely was the one
for whom i was made

25 comments:

Nirmal said...

ohho romantis..i luv this gal...

***she was so close to me***

just check this sentense gal..this makes u not straight..

ishqia said...

god! that was a mistake..

thanks for pointing out..

Ashish Soni said...

:)

thats so romantic and lovely..

preetisoni said...

:):):)...wow....yar:):)

ishqia said...

thanks ali and preeti for those beautiful comments..
glad to hear them

Mush said...

quite mushy.. ! :) u sure are in deep love .. eh ?

ishqia said...

thanks mush.....
but whats mushy.

deep...... no limits.. hahaha

ishqia said...

ok ok got what u meant mush...

had got confused between mushy and ur name

Lena said...

that was so sweet and romantic!
loved it! :)

ishqia said...

thanks lena for dropping by and appreciating the poem..

u too write great..

Huh? Where am I ? said...

intresting blog..:)
having good expression and feeling..

BTW thanks for stopping by.. i was on vacation so a bit late vist urs place.. i will take some time to read ur oldies post..:)

Sameera Ansari said...

That was sweet!

at0m said...

beautiful verse...

ishqia said...

@huh? thanks dude for dropping by and appreciating.

sameera... glad u visited.. thank you

unknown.. welcome here.. thanks for dropping by

at0m said...

ishqia i added you to links of my friend from my blog , ok ? ;] if u think is bad idea, tell me ;)

Keshi said...

lol @Nirmal's comment!


twas a very romantic read Ishqia!


Keshi.

ishqia said...

thanks keshi..

nothing to blame nirmal... i had made a pasting mistake when he read..

Arti Honrao said...

So Romantic :)



GBU
Arti

ishqia said...

thanks arti for dropping by and ur valuable comment

Hemanth Potluri said...

nice one ...

ishqia said...

thanks hemanth

jac said...

You do very well in verse !

Was looking for an English one among hinduthani snippets.

ishqia said...

i dont know if u will read this.. thanks jac

sabah said...

girl u touched me i miss my hbbi oo much pray he come to me soon,please can you translate this in urdu thanks

ishqia said...

thanks alot sabah for dropping by , me too miss my husband , so we both r in the same boat, hope u will meet him soon, well i will try to translate , but i dont think i will be able to justify the poem