door rehkar bhi qareeb hum hai
sapnau me har roz hamara sangam hai
roz tumhare sang waqt bitati hu
sapnau me hi sahi tum ko chu jati hu
kabhi tumhare balau me ungliya piroti hu
kabhi tumhare hontau ko muhabbat se chuti hu
dur rehkar bhi tumhari qurbat ka ehsaas hai
sapnau me hi sahi tu mere paas hai
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aww I dun u'stand Hindi Ishqia :(
but come ard to my blog n read my current post. I'd like to know wut u think :)
tnxx!
Keshi.
sapno me tu hi aata hai...how meaning ful n sweet ur poems are:):)
hey yar..ur profile says u are just 19....i mean you are so young....and u are married....:):):)....congrates!!!yar...
thanks preeti..
love brings sweetness..
all words from my heart..
young.. but im glad that i married..
lovely poem. haan door rehke bhi kuch log aas paas lagte hain...
lekin yeh baat humesha hothon pe muskaan nahin laati, kuchh aise log hain jinhein hum bhula dena chahte hain, lekin bhula nahin paate!
i like ur blog. if u are on orkut, plz join my blogging community.
hi. ive made a new orkut community for bloggers . id like to invite u to join it. its pretty interactive and is a nice way to get ur blog out there for others to read.
http://www.orkut.com/Community.aspx?cmm=51446226
join this new blogger community.
atleast have a look
cheers, chris
and oh thanx for visiting my blog and commenting. ive written a few poems too, do chk em out wen u have time:)
thanks crd for visiting.
i wrote b4 too. i m not on orkut. so i cant join that community.
Wah kya khoob likha hai!
Ishq kabhi kabhi kitna berehem hota hai...
thanks sameera for visiting
cute poem .. and very romantic.. guess ill read it out to my sapno ki rani .. heheheh.. kidding
thanks mush..
u will keep getting more such poems to read here..
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