us raat mai khush thi
kyu ke tu mere paas tha
labau par muskurahat thi
dil me khushi ka esaas tha
mai teri agosh me pinha thi kuch is tarah
tu meri agosh me madhosh tha jis tarah
nigahou ki nigahau se baat ho rahi thi
hontau ki hontau se mulaqat ho rahi thi
kya kahu us raat ke baare me
jab shama aur parwane ki mulaqat hui thi
14 comments:
what the language ? ;]
kya likthi ho mam!!!!!!........:):)..wonderful....
ok . that is urdu..
and whats ur language?
thanks preeti..
those warm words of urs made me happy..
waah waah....I almost wanna try writing something similar....
welcome sweetheart:):):)........but u deserve all that..:):):).afterall u write so well..
thanks akshay..
fall in love .. u will start writing for sure..
gr8 preeti..
Kewl.. Nice to read "love filled" "happy love" poems .. :) .. Well mine mostly end on a sad note .. hehehe.
By the way ,. u write well in english too .. ur last poem in english was too good
thanks alot mush...
just gave it a try..
Read my blog to find out what happened to my "Love"....damn
wah kya baat hai...
if i ever fall in love i will use ur poems....without ur permission...ok...lol
sure akshay..
no problem nirmal..
woow !!
saama and parwane ki mulakat ??
hope ki aisa har bar ho... har sama apne parwane se mile..:)
lovely lines.
thanks deeps..
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