Life is a gift: lost in his charms

Sunday, June 8, 2008

lost in his charms

i opened my eyes one day

to find myself in his arms

he was so close to me

i was lost in his charms

he held me close to himself

and said i love you dear

it surely wasnt a dream

for he was hard and clear

the warmth of his love

made happiness run through my veins

he surely was the one

for whom i was made

25 comments:

Nirmal said...: ohho romantis..i luv this gal...

***she was so close to me***

just check this sentense gal..this makes u not straight..; June 8, 2008 at 12:56 PM
ishqia said...: god! that was a mistake..

thanks for pointing out..; June 8, 2008 at 1:10 PM
Ashish Soni said...: :)

thats so romantic and lovely..; June 9, 2008 at 9:15 AM
preetisoni said...: :):):)...wow....yar:):); June 9, 2008 at 10:03 AM
ishqia said...: thanks ali and preeti for those beautiful comments..
glad to hear them; June 9, 2008 at 11:37 AM
Mush said...: quite mushy.. ! :) u sure are in deep love .. eh ?; June 9, 2008 at 1:18 PM
ishqia said...: thanks mush.....
but whats mushy.

deep...... no limits.. hahaha; June 9, 2008 at 1:34 PM
ishqia said...: ok ok got what u meant mush...

had got confused between mushy and ur name; June 9, 2008 at 1:42 PM
Lena said...: that was so sweet and romantic!
loved it! :); June 9, 2008 at 2:32 PM
ishqia said...: thanks lena for dropping by and appreciating the poem..

u too write great..; June 9, 2008 at 2:57 PM
Huh? Where am I ? said...: intresting blog..:)
having good expression and feeling..

BTW thanks for stopping by.. i was on vacation so a bit late vist urs place.. i will take some time to read ur oldies post..:); June 9, 2008 at 8:32 PM
Sameera Ansari said...: That was sweet!; June 9, 2008 at 10:33 PM
at0m said...: beautiful verse...; June 10, 2008 at 4:50 AM
ishqia said...: @huh? thanks dude for dropping by and appreciating.

sameera... glad u visited.. thank you

unknown.. welcome here.. thanks for dropping by; June 10, 2008 at 6:01 AM
at0m said...: ishqia i added you to links of my friend from my blog , ok ? ;] if u think is bad idea, tell me ;); June 10, 2008 at 7:04 AM
Keshi said...: lol @Nirmal's comment!

twas a very romantic read Ishqia!

Keshi.; June 10, 2008 at 9:13 AM
ishqia said...: thanks keshi..

nothing to blame nirmal... i had made a pasting mistake when he read..; June 10, 2008 at 11:04 AM
Arti Honrao said...: So Romantic :)

GBU
Arti; June 11, 2008 at 10:06 AM
ishqia said...: thanks arti for dropping by and ur valuable comment; June 11, 2008 at 10:54 AM
Hemanth Potluri said...: nice one ...; June 12, 2008 at 3:26 PM
ishqia said...: thanks hemanth; June 12, 2008 at 5:22 PM
jac said...: You do very well in verse !

Was looking for an English one among hinduthani snippets.; June 27, 2008 at 2:23 PM
ishqia said...: i dont know if u will read this.. thanks jac; January 11, 2009 at 10:56 AM
sabah said...: girl u touched me i miss my hbbi oo much pray he come to me soon,please can you translate this in urdu thanks; July 27, 2009 at 4:02 PM
ishqia said...: thanks alot sabah for dropping by , me too miss my husband , so we both r in the same boat, hope u will meet him soon, well i will try to translate , but i dont think i will be able to justify the poem; August 23, 2009 at 11:08 PM

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